Joaquin wrote the script so im gonna go over some of that as part of our planning

Hey guys so the titles pretty self explanatory lol

Joaquin finished the script

Lets get to reading I think

(Ill go over some plot aspects and match them up to our past research and stuff like that)

okay wait how do I put the script file link in here

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Whatever I'll figure that out later for now lemme get info down

So to start Otto does live up to our original idea of being innocent looking and having the hat like showing her face. What is new is Annie has a heavy southern accent and... a blog? (and an Aunt Maria with 4 dead kids). Personally I feel like Otto and Annie meeting does not live up to our original idea. However that may be for better or for worse. 

Our original planning

Result in the script

whys the formatting like that (whatever...)

Our planning accounted for a business card that Annie would hand Otto, and that was infact executed (We're gonna do that for our postcard!). I did notice that Annie's last name was changed (probably intentional) to Annie Christian instead of Annie Christopher. I'd need to ask Joaquin as to why but yeah it makes sense.

The car joke!

Mables introduction and the lore is revealed. Originally we were thinking of having Otto have a girlfriend or something like that but Emi found that uncomfortable, and it also didnt make much sense to fit the story (like why would someone traumatized by religion be in a relationship with someone whos involved in that religion and also moves on to Annie's one? A sister makes more sense, we agreed that a forceful connection was more logical). I do like that we incorporated the original religious trauma via conversion camp. 

The car joke!!!!!!!!!!!

I loved the idea for this and it being in the script is super fun!

Im really exited to figure out how we're gonna execute this. but the idea was funny from the start so im really glad we included it!

I like how instead of just a sudden break away (like how we originally ideated) Otto's sister simply appears less and less throughout the montage, Its nice distancing without words really needed.

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Okay I gotta give a lot of credit to joaquin these jokes are super funny I love the medical condition jokes

Like this one /\

And this one /\

Then like in our original idea the priest escapes, this time however its due to Annie's sister. and then Annie reveals himself as the devil and stuff. Then Otto is told to kill her sister to open a portal to hell.

I do feel like Joaquin didnt really include the "oh our main character gets all the power but like loses her self or like gets possesed by the end and stuff"

heres like that one image i already posted

Anyways its lowkey a fire script and it matches a lot of our planning, which is great.

wait offtopic ts song lowk fire

https://music.youtube.com/watch?v=_ysPpT7-f4o&si=ZSa71hSk3l-w150i

sorry it came on while I was writing ts

Okay so yeah uh thats pretty cool and stuff. um..........

Bye!